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How to Write a TEEL Paragraph

What goes in each part of a TEEL paragraph, with an example labelled part by part, sentence starters and the slips to check for.

Written byTMJ Tutoring

Published
7 October 2026
Year level
8
Reading time
6 min read

Your English teacher writes TEEL down the side of the board, one letter under another, and you copy it into your book. It looks simple enough on the board. Then you sit down to write about the book your class is reading, and it's not so clear what goes next to each letter.

TEEL is a way of remembering the four jobs in an analytical paragraph, the kind where you make a point about a text and back it up. Once you know what each job is, you can write the paragraph one part at a time and check each part on its own.

What each letter in TEEL stands for

TEEL splits an analytical paragraph into four parts:

  • T is the topic sentence: your point, in one sentence that answers the question you've been set.
  • E is the evidence: a short quote or a specific moment from the text that shows your point.
  • E is the explanation: how the evidence shows your point, such as what the words suggest and why the writer might have chosen them.
  • L is the link: a closing sentence that ties the point back to the question, or leads into your next paragraph.

TEEL is a teaching tool, not a curriculum rule. The Year 8 English curriculum asks you to back up your ideas with evidence, and TEEL is one scaffold for doing that: a template with a prompt for each part.

Schools use it in different ways. Some teachers put the explanation before the evidence, and some schools use a different scaffold altogether. If your teacher gives you a paragraph template, you can use it alongside the task's marking criteria.

One paragraph, part by part

The example below is about a short story made up for this guide, so it doesn't give away anything about the text you're studying. In The Last Bus to Marlo, 13-year-old Nina moves to a small coastal town.

A TEEL paragraph, labelled part by part

The question: how does the writer show that Nina changes?

In The Last Bus to Marlo, the writer uses Nina's headphones to show her slowly letting her new town in.

In the first chapter, Nina wears them “like a wall between her and the sea”.

The simile “like a wall” suggests the headphones aren't really about music. They're how she keeps the town out, so when she finally takes them off at the bus stop in the last chapter, the reader sees that wall come down.

Through one ordinary object, the writer shows that Nina's change happens across the whole story rather than in a single moment.

In your own work, the four parts run on as one paragraph.

Writing your own, one part at a time

You don't have to write the parts in the order they're read. It can be easier to begin with the evidence: a moment or a few words that stand out in the part of the text the question is about. What they show is often the start of your topic sentence.

When you choose a quote, a few words you can say a lot about are more useful than a long passage you can only summarise. That leaves more of your time for the explanation.

When you're stuck on how to begin a sentence, a starter can get you going. You can adapt these to most texts:

Sentence starters for each part of a TEEL paragraph

The square brackets mark where your own words go.

Topic sentence
  • In [text], the writer shows that…
  • [Character] is presented as…
  • The writer uses [writing choice] to suggest…
Evidence
  • Early in the story, [character] says…
  • This can be seen when the writer describes…
  • For example, in the scene where…
Explanation
  • The word “…” suggests…
  • This makes the reader feel…
  • The writer may have chosen this because…
Link
  • In this way, the writer shows…
  • Through [writing choice], the writer reveals…
  • This is why [character]…

Once you've used a starter a few times, you can change the wording so it sounds more like you.

Common slips, and what to do instead

  • Retelling the story. A sentence that would fit in a plot summary tells the reader what happens, not what it shows. You can turn it into a point by adding what the moment reveals about a character or idea.
  • A quote on its own. When the link comes straight after the evidence, the reader has to work out for themselves why the quote matters. You can add your explanation before the link.
  • Explaining by repeating. “Nina wears her headphones like a wall, which shows she uses them as a wall” says the quote again in other words. Asking what the comparison suggests about Nina gives you something new to say.
  • A link that copies the topic sentence. You can end by showing how your evidence answers the question, rather than just rewording your opening point.
  • A topic sentence that's a fact. “Nina moves to Marlo” is true, so there's nothing left to prove. A claim someone could disagree with, like “Nina slowly lets her new town in”, gives the rest of the paragraph a job.

When the same comment keeps coming back

If your marked work often comes back with “explain more” or “link to the question”, that comment tells you which part of your paragraphs to practise. You can take one of those paragraphs to your English teacher, ask what to try next and about school homework support.

For the rest of English, from reading closely to using your feedback, our guide to getting better at English in high school goes further.

For extra practice, TMJ Tutoring offers one-to-one Years 7 to 10 English tutoring, in person or online, around your schoolwork.

The letters are there to help while the structure is new. After enough paragraphs, the four parts usually come without you thinking about them, and you can spend that attention on what you want to say about the text.

Other questions about TEEL paragraphs

How long should a TEEL paragraph be?

There's no set length. Your task sheet or teacher may give you a word count; otherwise a paragraph is as long as it takes to make your point and explain your evidence.

Can I use more than one quote?

Yes. You can use two pieces of evidence in one paragraph, each followed by its own explanation, before the link. Both need to support the same point.

Will I keep using TEEL after Year 8?

The jobs stay the same in later years: a point, evidence and an explanation. The Year 9 curriculum, for example, includes the “organisation of ideas in paragraphs”. Whether your teachers keep using the word TEEL depends on the school.

Where to check the details

We checked these official sources on 6 November 2026.

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